Telliath's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Machete-]

Well..

For starters, it ain't heavy metal. The solo in the middle MIGHT swing for a heavy metal solo, but even then, FL Slayer just doesn't cut it. I'd suggest getting some more generic sounds. Getting sounds and really working to the core with them will be key. Otherwise, the song is just bland and looping with all sorts of different sounds making it awkward.

yotipo91 responds:

I didn't really know what to categorize it since it wasn't really techno or trance, so I put whatever. I'll try to vary things up in the next song. Thanks for reviewing!

[Undulate]

I don't know...

The sounds used were odd. That's really the biggest problem.

yotipo91 responds:

I didn't want anything ordinary :P

[Paradise on E (Karco Remix)]

It's great!

It's just a bit slow to get into since it's very repetitive for about the first minute but it's still intense enough to keep me listening. Great stuff. I like the way you remixed it. Keep it.

-Telliath

Karco responds:

How'd you review ALREADY? It hasn't even been 10 minutes yet. XD

Thanks anyway, glad you like it. :P

[Still Alive 8bit cover]

Great!

This is really well done! A little fast though, also, I noticed the rythme at 1:28 was changed. Odd. Not bad, but odd. Also, sorry for being techinal, but at 2:03, you have 7 8th notes that follow each other (G - A - Bb - Bb - A - G - G), while it should be "Well I'm glad I got burned..." (G - A - Bb - Bb - A - G) "Think of all the things we learned..." (Same rythme, different pitch).

pheel responds:

No, "Well I'm glad i got burned" is in the 2nd verse at 1:10.
At 2:03 it goes "I've experiments to run, there is research to be done"

Thanks for the review though :)

[:=>Carbon<=:]

IMO...

It needs some definate mastering... especially towards the percussions. Go take a look at the volume of your crash cymbols. It's a great song all-in-all. Well done! Keep it up.

Moltov responds:

Yeah thanks, I was just trying out some new stuff.
-Moltov

[Unlucky Luck]

It's alright.

You've just got to build up alot of your skills. It's very repetitive but, the main rythme is very catchy but is constant. Also, everything is too quiet. Just keep it up buddy! :)

ShadowStalk3r13 responds:

Thanks for te review, and thanks for making the mistake of 1 :p

[|| Aqua Loop ||]

It's good

It's really relaxing but I think the ending should loop better to the begging. That's the only thing I think yous should fix :P

Ambrossys responds:

Thanks :D

Yeah, you're right... I'll note that :)

[Ghostwave]

Good job!

Won over my 10 and 5! Great song. I wish you luck with the clubs. They will be very lucky to receive you and you should be proud to be playing there! Good luck and continue to write music for NG and the Holland clubs haha!

NemesisTheory responds:

w00t! Thanks for the scores! :D

And thanks for wishing me luck, I'll need it. They're definitely asking for a whole lot more for the next one, but I'm sure I can muster up something that'll make people move around once again. :)

And don't worry mate, I will. :D

[´Kriz: Forever]

Very catchy!

This is great! Keep it up.

Kr1z responds:

Wowy! Ok, i'll keep it up ^^

[(WF1) Moonlight Knight 1.7]

Great!

This is the greatest song, in my opinion of course, that you've written! It's catchy and a great tune, but still slow which is not always the case on NG. Most people like fast-paced and upbeat songs. But this is still catchy. I think the only bad thing about this song would be the lack of effects on the percussions. Save that for the 2.0 release!

wyldfyre1 responds:

yeah, the percussion is something i keep saying i'm goingto work on hah. problem is i usually don't. Thanks for the great review =)